Do you want to bash this one as well??

Question

Here's a poem I wrote a couple of months ago....go ahead do your worst....bash it for all I care....I don't anymore.....I don't care if you stab it until it bleeds...but just read.

Moving On.

I can't take this pain anymore
I loved you but what for??
all you gave me was heartache
baby I'm through

You can light this fuse
because you're no longer my muse
I'm tired of being pushed around
and you were the one who pushed
me to the ground

I'm sorry to say you were
my last hope for love
I didn't think I would get this far

Thekeys to the car are on the table
It's time for me to drive far away
from your love
as far as I am able

You lave me no choice
I'm leaving so don't bother looking for me
Because I'm somone you'll never again see.



Go on give me your best shot....

Answer 1

wow.................that poem was awsum! pain and misery, all put into a poem! poems like this are sum of the best kind.......y r u so messed up on the inside?this poem is......the truth of how you feel right now........i cant say anymore than, awsum, sad, and phenominal all at the same time....this rocks

Answer 2

Some of the most beautiful things come from pain and misery.



I'm glad you have an outlet.

Answer 3

Wow.... That was nice =)



You could be a poet and not even... know it? Hahah, sorry...



But really, that was a beautiful poem, it's a tragedy that it took heartbreak for you to write it.

Answer 4

MY GOD CONTACT BUDDY ! WHY ARE YOU HAVING A BAD NIGHT? you are such a great friend. i hope ur night gets much better. i love u contact buddy !!!!! im sorry for ur ex lover? they are mean !!! you will find a new love !! dont worry, ur 2 sexy 2 be sad. be happy ! <3 great poem man... u rock my socks off !

Answer 5

that sounds like a song, you are a really good poetry writer :)

i'm sorry you're down in the dumps, hope you feel better soon!

Answer 6

I like your poem - although filled with with pain.

Answer 7

it made me cry can I have a hug?

beautiful 100%

little spelling error but it felt so deep

why would you want me to be so mean to you?

Answer 8

its beautful dude.

love it. i give you a A++ and a

kiss on the cheek for thatt(:.

also i give you a gold star.

Answer 9

i think its pretty awesome.



expecting the worst so you never get disappointed i see?

Answer 10

it's ok, but how about a sample of your prose

Answer 11

It's lovely . . .