do you wish you could see the world thru my eyes?

Question

in my world the grass is red and the sky is green,
in my world things are not what they seem,
in my world...i am KING,
in my world if what you dream is what you believe then it will be your reality,
in my world you can achieve anything,
in my world you can be whatever you wanna be...anything.

thats part of a poem im writing what do you think about it?

Answer 1

What if I dream that I am king? (ya big dink).

Answer 2

If in your world I can achieve anything, then I'd love to live there an achieve 100 billion dollars.

Answer 3

Sounds good. Keep going. I'd like to see the finished product.

Answer 4

Not really a poem but real poetry doesn't need anyone telling you it is good.



How many artists were famous when they were alive? not many, most were known after their time





And remember it is your world

Answer 5

no cuz then id see ur brain and thad be gross

red grass would be intence and green skies would suck

same with mine...if u know wut i mean

I AM QUEEN

i can make that happen with my happy pills

happy sugar cubes

happy powder



oh i didnt even read the question

sure its cool

Answer 6

No because then I would probably have a $hitty outlook on everything. LOL

Answer 7

It is interesting...but absolute dirt when compared to True Poetry.